Pitch Feedback - Focus group

This are the answers i got from my focus group.
This are the answers i got from my classmates after i showed them the pitch and asked them a few questions
 1. Does the target audience match the idea for my music video ? in what way ?

- Yes, it links and it's a typical emotive song about love and it goes with the audience
 -I think it does match with the target audience as they would be interested in RnB
 -I don't think it appeals to the male genre. the lyrics and music seem female oriented
- Yes as it quite modern and matched up very well.
 - Yes , the musc relates to our age. more female oriented because its slow.
 - Yes , the idea will be popular with women but maybe not men.

2. Do you think the music video is appropriate for the genre ?

- Yes
 - Yes because RnB songs are about love
-the video seems to fit the song and the idea of relationships is very common
- Yes
- No it's not really RnB
- Yes because it fits well wth the RnB genre and especially the instrument used

3. Does the music video seem achievable with college equipment ?

- yes but a piano might be hard to find
- Yes i do
-they shouldn't be a problem with the equipment but maybe the locations.
-Yes as it's simplistic but straight forward
 -Yes definitely
 - The music video in general seems achievable as long as you can get the piano

 4. Do you think the narrative is appropriate for the song , why ?

- Yes because the song is about love and the location is very romantic
 -yes think you really convey the genre characteristics
-the narrative and story board seem to reflect the lyrics.
-yes as the lyrics match the narrative
 - yes because t related to the lyrics
 - The narrative is very appropriate , because it shows people in a relationship

 5. Is there any constructive criticism , anything I can improve on ?

-could have maybe more of a story line.
- Change locations
- re - think location of piano
- try and encorpatate a lot of different shots for good effect
- Nothing .
 - You will need to add more shots / camera angles more often that you put in your storyboard.